Monday, December 14, 2009

Writing Time 1.1

A student writes:

"Nowadays, a mechanical pencil is the most convenience in the stationeries. But I don't think it. A pencil is simple and cheap. It can't be difficult to break a lead. It must shave many times for it fault. In case of a mechanical pensil. It's expensive for it fauilt. But people were used it on fact."

Next. Background information...Kotatsu is a type of heated table that Japan has...very nifty. The student writes:

"Nowadays. Kotastu is getting more and more important. Kotastu --> a family pleasure of home life. I cannot readily appear. a heater --> The whole room warms. I become the fire."

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